Kavitakanitkar’s Weblog


A Story Starter…
October 14, 2008, 5:52 pm
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Something brushed up against my foot. I looked down to see a sewer rat on the ground, looking up at me. I shooed it away and I trudged on through the tunnel, which carried the strong scent of human waste. I was running out of time. I’d be at the concert by now if I hadn’t dropped my keys into the toilet! I accidentally pulled the flush and down they went. That’s why I ended up here.

All of a sudden, I saw a small, silvery object that was stuck between two drainpipes. Hallelujah! I found my keys! I ran towards them and yanked them out of there. Now, all I needed to do was find a way out… I’ll just go back the way I came.

Unfortunately, that was virtually impossible because I went through so many tunnels, and took so many turns that I couldn’t possibly remember them all. I peered into the sewage water to see my reflection in it.

I’m Kavita Kanitkar. I have black hair with bangs, brown eyes, I’m on the taller side, my skin is sort of tanned, and I mostly wear baggy clothes that are black. And right now, I was doomed because I’d miss the concert being held by one of my favorite bands of all time: My Chemical Romance.

Before I could make an attempt at finding a way out of this place, someone, or something, knocked me out cold and the last thing I could remember was how I stood near a tunnel and some big fat guy assaulted me. I remember trying to punch him in the stomach, but he was so fat that my hand got stuck in. I tried pulling it out but it was no use. Then, his fist came into contact with my face. A second later, all I could see was black.

I woke up to find my self in a dark room lying on a mattress with a pillow and a plain woolen blanket. I couldn’t see much but I managed to make out the slight figure of a man wearing a mask. Next thing I know, he pulls out a knife and the silver blade is right up against my throat…

 

The man in the mask...

The man in the mask...

 

So there you have it… a cliffhanger ending. More?

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4 Comments so far
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wow! but i wanna know the end!! keep up the good work! :D

Comment by sarahburney

It’s nice and it also gives a thrill…nice picture BTW…lol…^_^

Comment by maribeth11

coooooool!! amazing…i luuuuuuuuuuv da way u ryt man!!!! teach me sum techniques…. :D …nywayzz kep up da gud wrk!

Comment by Tathir Abid

My Chemical Romance? ohh…man i love their songss

Comment by Azri




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